One thing leads to another...

Sedona's winter sunsets are glorious.

As autumn blew into winter, and winter is now shifting—ever so skittishly—toward spring, I’ve been thinking a lot about transitions. Something about a season’s changing always leaves me feeling a bit unsatisfied, usually because I haven’t traveled, hiked, written, or lived as much as I’d hoped to during that particular time period. It feels like loose ends or unfinished business.

Similarly, transitions are important in writing, getting smoothly from one sentence or paragraph or chapter to the next. When I don’t take the time to add missing transitions as I’m polishing a piece, it feels unfinished and choppy. Transitioning from one idea to the next may be as simple as adding a single word to show relationship: “Now.” “Next.” “Then.” A complex idea might require a phrase or sentence to summarize before the writing continues.

But sometimes that transition or lead-in may be as subtle as echoing structure, sound, or rhythm. Techniques like alliteration (repeating a sound) are usually associated with children’s stories, poetry, and songwriting, but they can be effective in prose if they aren’t overdone. And deliberately amusing when they are: One of my favorite books, Nancy E. Shaw’s delightful Sheep Take a Hike, makes me smile every time I think about it. The language of the story pulls the reader along as much as the tale itself does. 

Language is a rich medium that offers endless possibilities beyond mere communication. Adding transitions, especially in casual writing like an email message or a blog post, may seem like a detail that’s unnecessarily time-consuming. Or maybe even a little condescending, like scattering breadcrumbs along a trail where the destination is clearly in sight. But transitions make the journey easier and sometimes even fun.

Now, if only winter would take the hint….